22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3



Reflection: Thank you to everyone that gave me feedback on all my pitches, you have all helped me improve. The main point of feedback that helped me the most is shortening my pitch! Besides that everyone was very positive!

What I changed based on feedback: Due to a misunderstanding in the directions, I made my pitch 90 seconds, which is quite long. After realizing it only had to 60 seconds, this made it much more manageable. I was able to cut out the unneeded information I was saying to just fill the time. Now, I believe my pitch is more clear, precise, and on topic.


Comments

  1. Duong PhamMarch 29, 2020 at 5:08 PM

    Hello Savannah,

    Your elevator pitch was on point, you spoke with confidence and were coherent with what you had to say. I believe your idea is great for teenagers and adults to listen together and whatnot. Great job with your post, hope to see this plan executed in the future.

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  2. CarlApril 1, 2020 at 2:13 PM

    Hey Savannah,

    Your hook to begin the video is definitely great in getting the viewers engaged to what you are going to talk about. Overall, the presentation of your pitch is great, and conveyed with confidence. I think your idea makes a lot of sense, and I honestly did not think of an upgrade to AirPods until I saw your idea.

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  3. Victoria MayApril 1, 2020 at 2:37 PM

    Hi Savannah,
    I really enjoyed watching your pitch! I thought it was engaging and a truly great idea. I actually just had the problem you were talking about today and it would have been very helpful to have your product. Disconnecting and reconnecting can be so annoying and time consuming. Also, I think it would be beneficial for this technology to be available in more than just headphones (i.e. speakers, vehicles, etc.). Great job!
    Sincerely,
    Victoria May

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  4. Joseph Maier's BlogApril 5, 2020 at 2:46 PM

    Hello Savannah,

    I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. I though that you seemed very relaxed when making the pitch which helped you seem more trustworthy. I think that you did a great job explaining what your product is and how it will directly benefit the consumer.The length of the pitch it perfect. When I made my second pitch, I made the same mistake as you. I though that the pitch had to be 90 seconds which made it far too long.

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  5. Gordon CheyneApril 6, 2020 at 7:38 AM

    Hello Savannah,

    I enjoyed this elevator pitch, there was some things in your presentation style that I would definitely like to steal for the next time I do one. I went back and watched your old pitch to be able t compare. This one is definitely more clear and concise, not just in the length of it but in the word choice and presentation of it.

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